Deal of a Lifetime
By Barbara Huffert
Ellora's Cave Publishing
ISBN: 9781419909641
Contemporary
142 Pages
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Annette Phelps is meeting her sister Candace and her brother-in-law Lars for dinner. Not wanting to hear another one of her sister's lectures on Annette's life, or lack of, she makes up a boyfriend who is busy elsewhere and may not make it. Imagine their surprise when he shows up in the middle of drinks and Candace's lecture on immoral sex. But no one is more surprised than Annette. After all her boyfriend is supposed to be make believe.
Michael Richards, Rich to family and friends, is anything but happy when his best friend, Dan, overhears a woman talking about him in a bar. All he can think of is what his bitch of a wife, Monica, is up to now. They've been separated since he caught her in bed with someone else but she won't sign the divorce papers. All he wants is to get her out of his life and all she seems to want is to make his life hell. That and part of any money he might inherit from his grandfather.
But Annette is not what he expects. She's sweet and sincere and it is hard to remember that she is enemy number one right now. No matter what he can't get her to admit what Monica put her up to. Rich is torn between wanting her and hating her. And Annette is just as conflicted. Will they ever get to the truth?
Deal of a Lifetime is quite a book. I'll admit that I hated Rich almost from the moment he was introduced. Ms. Huffert didn't share enough of his story up front for me to empathize with him. I would start to forgive him and then he would do or say something to change my mind. I started to feel less for Annette as well, wondering why any woman would put up with a man that seemed bi-polar at best. But I stuck with it, kept reading, searching for that something that was missing. And I'm glad that I did. Ms. Huffert gave me what I was begging for and finally allowed me to see what Rich was feeling and hiding from. The introduction of his grandfather, Michael, was paramount to that. It was through his eyes that the reader is finally able to see the man that Rich once was and could be again. There were some great secondary characters in the story and I hope to see their stories unfold as well. All in all Deal of a Lifetime was a good story.
3 out of 5 Quills.
©Reviewed by Debbie H.
May 29, 2007