A Deadly Exchange

By Sheryl Jane Stafford

Writer’s Showcase

Mystery

Paperback

December 2000

www.iUniverse.com

353 pages

$17.95 USD

ISBN: 0-595-15677-0

Setting: A sailboat on the sea in the Bahamas region.

 

 

A Deadly Exchange begins with a special agent being chased by a drug lord’s henchmen in the Bahamas. Surrounded at the airport, he chooses to commit suicide rather than risk putting his fellow agents at risk. From this point, the action never lets up. There is a high level of suspense throughout the book.

 

When Matt and Alex pick up their sailboat in the Bahamas, they have no idea that drug dealers have stashed cocaine on the boat by mistake. They are well underway with their voyage before the drug dealers realize their dope is missing. Of course, the Columbian drug lord does not take the news lightly and immediately dispatches the bumbling duo to retrieve the cocaine. A cat and mouse game across the ocean begins.

 

Matt hides the dope. The dealers take Alex hostage and Matt must trade the dope for his beloved. Enter the DEA, with a traitor who is loyal to the drug lord. The exchange turns deadly when the traitor agent warns the drug lord of Matt’s arrival. Matt is greeted by a sadistic thug and savagely beaten. Meanwhile, Alex escapes with plans to steal a boat and flee at first light. She overhears two men talking about the new prisoner and realizes that it is Matt. Now, Alex must figure out some way to free Matt without getting both of them killed in the process. 

 

I am impressed with Stafford’s ability to portray such diversity in her characters to intensely detailed extremes. She displays tremendous skill in building believable characters that react in a manner that would be typical for someone of their type, class, and gender. I was intrigued by her “former POW” Vietnam veteran. There are so many things that simply cannot be researched and many of these things lie deeply within the realm of the POW. Then I learned that her husband is a former POW. I commend her for doing such an excellent job with this character and for including the POW aspect in his makeup.

 

The story moves at high speed and will keep you reading. It is quite difficult to find a stopping point because there is always something going on that you need to resolve. You know the answer is there … perhaps in the next few pages. The plot develops chronologically and in an orderly fashion. The return to stasis is concrete and leaves the reader well satisfied that all questions have been answered and all conflicts resolved. It is an excellent book that should appeal to a wide mainstream audience.

 

--Alicia Karen Elkins, GWN Book Reviewer, Native American Editor

5/22/2003


A Superior Mystery

By Carl Brookins

Top Publications, Inc., Dallas, TX, 2002

Paperback, 302 pages, $14.95

ISBN: 1-929976-17-8

 

 

A Superior Mystery is a strong mystery novel developed around the logging industry of Northern Wisconsin. It touches on environmental issues and Native American concerns about exhaustion of our natural resources. The author obviously is not afraid to dive into controversial waters.

 

The story opens in the 1890s with a logger working on the barges hauling logs. This brief passage closes as he is shot. We jump to modern day and a sailboat race during which Mary Whitney’s boat collides with another. She is left without a boat for the racing season. We learn that she is involved with Michael Tanner, a public relations specialist and that she has ties to the logging industry in northern Wisconsin.

 

A company has developed a plan to salvage logs that were spilled into Lake Superior. They want to hire Tanner to promote their idea as an ecologically sound alternative to further logging. He immediately becomes suspicious because they seem to know everything about him and could have hired someone from their own area. Instead, they have asked him to relocate. Their offer of the use of a sailboat clenches the deal and he sets off for northern Wisconsin with Mary.

 

Things were going great until divers discovered the body of the man in the introduction, Jarl Rylston. Between the time they spotted it and the time they went back to retrieve it, currents had moved the skull away from the rest of the skeleton. The bullet hole in the back told authorities that they had a murder on their hands, but they needed the whole body.

 

Next, it jumps to a scene of a sheriff investigating the murder of a man in a logging camp, supposedly from an argument. Now, back to the present. So it goes, with the author feeding you tiny glimpses of information about the past, while carrying forward the present happenings. It will keep you wondering “whodunit,” but the outcome is rather predictable. I was not surprised and did not think there were any twists, but I did enjoy the story. 

 

Brookins has a highly descriptive style, though his writing is not really “conversational.” The way he arranges his phrases is more academic than conversational. He is technically correct in his writing, but it is a fact that few persons speak in a formal and grammatically correct way. His writing would be much more personal and conversational if he would relax and let the true nature of American mutilation of the Queen’s English shine through. According to Stephen King (On Writing), you should never say: “He stopped to perform an act of defecation” when what you really mean is: “He need to go now!”

 

A Superior Mystery is the second book in the Michael Tanner Mystery Series. The first book was Inner Passages. Brookins has been a freelance photographer, Public Television program director, and a faculty member at Metropolitan State University in St. Paul, MN. He is currently a freelance mystery reviewer.

 

****

 

Written by Alicia Karen Elkins, GWN Reviewer

5/20/2003


 


At Risk
By Kit Ehrman
Poisoned Pen Press, Scottsdale, AZ
Mystery
Hardbound
2002
www.poisonedpenpress.com
292 pages
$24.95 USD
ISBN: 1-59058-036-2

Setting: The heart of Maryland’s horse racing country at one of the finer stables.

Twenty-one year old Stephen Cline had years of experience working with horses when he landed the job as barn manager at one of the leading horse farms in Maryland known as Foxdale Farm.  Most considered him too young for this position, but he seemed to be handling the responsibilities well until the morning he interrupted a gang of horse thieves.  He was kidnapped, thrown into the trailer with the horses, and brutally hauled away.  His escape focused the attention of a ruthless, evil killer to a pinpoint on his head.  Steve found himself in a position of not being able to trust anybody when he took up where the police left off.

Kit Ehrman has penned a superb mystery much in the style of Dick Francis.  Her experience with horses is evident in her language and descriptions.  The reader immediately understands that the author knows the horse world inside and out.  Her character development is intricate.  The further you read, the more you learn about the way the characters think and feel.  The story flows smoothly and things make chronological sense.  She does not jump around and confuse the reader.

For a first novel, this book is a real surprise.  I am quite impressed with the writing skill displayed here.  The editing was clean and the story well presented.  If the author did such an outstanding job on her first book, she is sure to become well known in the mystery genre.

Kit Ehrman has worked as a veterinary assistant, groom, and barn manager at several facilities in Pennsylvania and Maryland.  She is currently working on the second Stephen Cline mystery while living on a horse farm in Columbus, Indiana.

If you love horses, a high level of suspense, wonderful good guys, and horrible bad, this is the book for you!  It will keep you on the edge of your seat and take you deep inside the high dollar horse circuit.

*****
Alicia Karen Elkins, GWN Reviewer, 5/21/2003



 
Deadly Perversions

Brett Arquette

The Lighthouse Press, Inc,

www.LighthouseEditions.com, 2002

Paperback, 405 pages, $14.95

ISBN: 1-932211-00-4

 

Deadly Perversions is my kind of book. It takes the realities of human nature at its best and worst, adds the X factor, keeps you turning pages as quickly as you can read until the very last page, and leaves you feeling fully satisfied with the story. I am recommending this book for the Marley Award. It is the best mystery (with definite horror overtones) I have read in a long time.

 

The super company, Talon, has developed a groundbreaking program in cybersex. You simply buy their program and 3D glasses and you can have safe, anonymous cybersex with anyone. If you do not like your body, you can change anything or everything. If you want the face of a movie star with the body of your local newscaster, you can easily create that desired effect. People around the world are jumping on the bandwagon. Why risk getting AIDS or any number of STDs when there is such an easy alternative that guarantees safety.

 

But does it really guarantee safety? Suddenly people are dying in mass epidemic numbers. The one link is the Talon cybersex program, yet we all know that disease cannot be transmitted through cyberspace … or do we? Once you read this book, you will never look at your computer in the same way.

 

I was hooked from the beginning when the ultra-sophisticated blonde comes strolling into the Talon building, hits a wet floor, does a three-point landing, and slides right past the receptionist. I had tears rolling down my face. The author must have stalked women for six months to have such a perfect description of how a woman falls when snapping a high heel! I have been there, done that, and can attest to the accuracy of his play-by-play. 

 

Arquette interweaves so many characters and subplots that it is impossible to select a lead character. He draws you into their lives and makes you care about them. His character development is extremely advanced and realistic. He takes you behind the scenes of the American faces and into the darker personal realm. From the bum on the street to the ambulance attendants, you will come to love them all.

 

Brett Arquette is the son of Lois Duncan, author of I Know What You Did Last Summer. Obviously, a flair for mystery and horror does run in their family. He is a contributing editor for eWeek Magazine and columnist for Smart Computing, PC Week, and InfoWorld. He has the technical expertise to make the impossible seem real.

 

 

Written by Alicia Karen Elkins, GWN Reviewer

5/20/2003


Sacrificed Lives

By Beverly Brackett

Covos Day

Suspense

Trade

2001

www.mazoe.com

233 pages
ISBN: 1-919874-21-6

The last thing Harriet Ross wants to do is return to the small South Carolina town she used to visit as a child.  This is because when she was a teen, on a hot summer day when she wasn't feeling well, her cousins, twins Yvette and Yvonne bugged her to go to the store with them.  She gives them some money and asks them to bring her a grape soda...it’s 1966, a small town, no one thinks twice about sending a pair of six year olds to the store.  Sadly though, the unthinkable happens...one the twins disappears, the other is eventually found hiding in a barn, her mind gone from the terror that she witnessed and never recovered from. 

 

Thirty years later, Harriet is back, to probate her Aunt Missella Mayhew’s estate, and to set up some sort of trust fund for Yvette, who now lives in a home.  As she realizes that her Aunt couldn’t possibly have afforded such an expensive care home for Yvette, and as guilt leads her to question what more could have been done to find the kidnapper, she asks her lawyer Balt Monroe to help her investigate.  He knows he can’t help...but his old friend, Doc Halliday, a private investigator, can.  The case will take them through strange twists and turns, through the evils of racism to the ultimate and most sorrowful of crimes.

 

At the heart of Sacrificed Lives is the topic of racism.  Brackett studies it unflinchingly, as she introduces us to the harsh, vile world of the Klu Klux Clan.  She also balances things out, trying not to overwhelm the reader with one viewpoint.  For example, she has one white protagonist, Balt, who is a good and generous man, and a Black protagonist, named Punch, whose hatred of white people makes a basically good...if hard...man loose control.  Doc, our main character, understands both these worlds as he tracks down clues.  It’s also a novel with many surprises...from the sorrow of the twin’s cloth doppelgangers that serve as mute testimony to the fact that Missella never recovered from the loss of her children, to the fact that from the beginning we know that Yvette is not quite as incapacitated mentally as everyone thinks.  The idea of being stuck prisoner in one’s own mind is almost as frightening as the truth of what she witnessed that night 30 years ago.

 

This book is extremely well paced, thoughtful and exciting, filled with a true flavor of the south and unforgettable characters. 

 

 

4 out of 5 trench coats

Cindy Lynn Speer, GWN Book Reviewer

May 5, 2003


Virtual Murder

Jennifer Macaire

Novel, March 2003, 164pp.

ISBN 1591050774

 

In the not too distant future, the Net has become such a vital part of day to day living that it has it’s own governing body and police force.  One of the hottest places on the net is Virtual Dreams; a site where people can take a virtual vacation that lasts two weeks in net time but only two days in real time.  It is the ultimate in virtual reality and participants can do anything on his or her own except have sex. 

 

The owner of the business, Andrea Girt, has a waiting list a mile long and both she and the net, which takes a cut, believe their site can only get better.  When the first tour guide gets killed while within the tour, net officials believe he had a heart attack but Andrea thinks somebody killed the tour guide.  When a second attempt is made, the Net police are forced to look for answers to the creators of the program, mutants that don’t officially exist and have never left their cages in an underground top secret scientific laboratory.  Only the mutant (who can pass for human) Monkey can stop the killer but that means turning against his own kind.

 

This science fiction mystery has a fascinating premise that readers will find pulls them into the story line almost from the start.  The characters are well developed and believable, but the star of VIRTUAL MURDER is Monkey, a mutant with a human heart and soul, who can operate independently of the net.  Jennifer Macaire is a talented writer who has found her niche in futuristic mysteries. One hopes that readers haven’t seen the last of Monkey.

 

Harriet Klausner, GWN Book Reviewer

4/3/2003


Michael Kimball

Green Girls  

Harper Collins

http://www.harpercollins.com

Mystery

Hardcover

December 2002

384 pages

$24.95 US

ISBN 0-06-008737-4

 

            You can sympathize with Jacob Winter from the first.  He took his son to a makeup doubleheader, which means that he and his son could only stay for the first game.  He ends up coming home early, to find the evidence of a romantic dinner on the table.  The oyster minestrone soup that his wife only makes when she’s in love, lobster and wine.  The baseball game is on the radio, and his wife and his ex-psychologist are standing around acting guilty.  The psychologist, Price Ashworth, tries to control the situation, but the outrage of it all is too much, and Jacob attacks him, then rips apart the house.  In jail, he doesn’t remember anything after he looses his temper, but Price and Laura aren't pressing charges.  Unfortunately, the State is, felony assault.  He is surprised to find that Laura isn’t the one who posted the bail, it’s a woman he barely knew in college, Alix Callahan.  When he goes to Alix’s exotic flower shop, Green Girls, to discover why, her answers are not satisfactory.  She is there with another woman, July, and seems almost afraid of her. 

 

            For Jacob, the world becomes a tangled mess...the prosecuting attorney is trying to convict him on the felony assault, he’s lost his job until things get straightened out, he can’t talk to his wife or approach his house because of a restraining order.  Of course, it gets worse...Alix asks to meet him on a bridge, and jumps off of it, just before July shoots at her, grazing the rail with her bullet.  July insists that she saved his life, but can she be trusted?  What part does Price Ashton play in all this?  And who is this Serano guy who pops up every once in awhile?

 

            At first the book is a little hard to get into, because everyone’s motives, from the faithless Laura to the mysterious July, are completely muddled.  Jacob doesn’t have anyone he can trust.  His first and only priority is to hang onto his son Max, who he loves very much.  Once we get past the beginning, story elements slowly unreel, showing us a very complicated structure of deceit and the desire for power.  The characters are all very complex, and sometimes seem to be working deliberately against the story, keeping readers wondering exactly what is going on, and why is Jacob so thoroughly involved?

 

            Once the events begin to fall into place, there’s an almost audible click, and everything begins to make sense.  I kept reading because that’s what makes it irresistible, the sense coming out of chaos. 

 

 

4 out of 5 Calla Lilies

Cindy Lynn Speer, GWN Reviewer

12/16/2002